Essay About Less Video And Enough Detail

Communications
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4 qualities of good communication
Economy – return on time
Directness – honesty (or the impression of honesty)
Detail – (one that give u enough detail to evaluate it for urself) form of honouring the audience
Voice
Bureaucratese
Wordiness – using more words than u need to
Redundancy
Clichйs – is like cancer wordiness is like the flu
If you wanna convey sumthing always put it in a story – it always works and engages their minds
For Monday we have to write a bad paragraph
Write about 50 words that say nothing using clichйs wordiness redundancy
Assignment 1.
Write a simple story that has happened to you as a kid or last week or this morning doesnt have to be significant or big
Dont try to be smart, dont try to impress prof. use everyday language
Short sentences, you should hesitate on any sentence over 10 words
Tell your story tru detail show what happened
Write in your own voice
No morals please – no summaries about what it means
Double space and title page
20 min or less video with each person in the group telling a little story with the same principles as before
Communications 2
Editing process
Identifying strength → positive process. Gives clarity, humor, detail, personality, voice, lively sentences,
Edit → weakness that can easily be changed that contributes to the piece.
Opportunities → anything the writer did not take advantage of.
Always use a roadmap in presentations
Talk with not at
Never read your presentation includes making notes
Never memorize the presentation
Voice means expressing your personality and experience
Speak in a comfortable and understandable way … humanize yourself
Include something that is