The Worst Feedback
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I believe that the best way to get people to see your point of view are all; to make them feel an emotion; make them understand through research; and make them see the similiarities between them and me. I think that if I use the emotional approach I have more possibilities to catch the attention of my audience more than if I just use a bunch of information that will be boring. If my audience is bored they wont pay me attention. On the other hand I can also use researchs and examples. People are more likely to be convinced if they see that my thesis is based on a logical thought and that I am not the only one who think the way I think. Finally I can approach to my audience by showing them that I am not so different from them.
The best feedback That a teacher can give me is one in which I am constructively corrected. One feedback that make me to be better, offering security, clear instructions, and benefits, so the next time I make an assigment I will improve my productivity and the quality of my work.
The worst feedback that a teacher can give me is to tell me what have done all wrong or that is obvious taht I do not understand anything about what I am wrting about. It is not the same to say that than that I can learn from my mistakes and to learn how can I do it better next time. I also find a feedback is bad when I know my work is not perfect and there is no comments to Improve it. When that happen I feel ignored and that my work is not taken seriously. I feel that I cant imrpve more and thats why my proffesor doesnt spend time on me.