Essay About Better Person And Single Mother

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Personal statement draft Throughout my career as a student I have always wanted to be a  brilliant. The kind of brilliance that made people look in awe.  I looked at the way people were deemed a better person in society if you were smart and  that made me  slightly jealous. I had always been an above average student in high school and as such I was not content.Experiencing this constant branding of unspectacular  has created this  passive hunger within me  to be successful to silence everyone . I was born to a single mother in the USA and we moved to Nigeria and I have  watched my mother toil and grovel so we can have the best things her money could afford.People might say he has no father figure how can he know what it is to be a man but I will always  concur as my mother has shown me what it is to be a man and as a matter of fact Owens Xavier2015FA Introduction to Sociology (SOC-111-352)Presentation critic workNamePROCONThomas ThompsonHad a good array of pictures and explained effectively.Got kind of boring towards the end.Dominique Simmonsspoke with authority with her voicehowever as she progressed her voice got timid.Was at times not organisedJaysia Noelspowerpoint had a really good displayDidnt seem sure of herself when she spokeDanny NgoUtilised the vocabulary words wellhad to struggle to hear due to how low he spokeSarah McAdorywas very efficient in her deliveryhowever i had to listen close cause her voice was a bit lowJaed Godwin-Jacksonpresentation was neat and concisewas a bit too loud and didnt look like she took it seriouslyShakorya Campbellhad a well done powerpoint and was well organised.could not see the correlation between her topic and presentation(power point)Rodrick Brownhad good pictures and related them well to the topic.i think he was a tad bit over eccentricElvis Bahmanage to convey his points outhe repeated points Monica Arroyohad a good presence and explained well however it seemed a bit dry,like as if she wasnt interested