Effective Business Com 140 (week 3)
Essay title: Effective Business Com 140 (week 3)
Effective Business Com 140 (week 3)
Manager
Teammates
Travel Agent
Purpose
To inform the department manager(s) that the quarterly financial goal was not met
To inform the company coworkers of the department that the quarterly bonus was not met; thus the team will not receive our bonus checks
To inform my travel agent that as of this time I will not be able to plan the trip to Europe, but instead plan for a future date
Audience
Department Manager(s)
Teammates, fulltime and part-time
Local travel agent Sarah B.
Negative formal
Negative formal
Negative informal
Content
Hi, Chad,
After the Christmas season the department had a slow start. The department picked up sales for the rest of the quarter, and just missed the quarterly average for receiving our bonuses. I believe next quarter will be more successful than the past one. If anyone in the department has any questions regarding our goals feel free to email me and I will be more than happy to be of any assistance.
To my fellow coworkers,