Comparison âliving in Sinâ and âsex Without LoveâEssay Preview: Comparison âliving in Sinâ and âsex Without LoveâReport this essayâLiving in Sinâ and âsex without loveâThere are many differences in Adrienne Richs Living in sinâ and Sharon Olds âsex without loveâ but there are some similarities. Living in Sinâ and âsex without loveâ both portrait ones guilty conscious of immature mistakes.
The poem âliving in sinâ tells a story from a wifes perspective; she thought her marriage to be totally different from what it is now. Things dont happen by themselves, you have to do them. In the beginning, there is a lengthy description of things that she wanted done but it seems as if she never tried or got help doing them. The couple should try new things so that their marriage doesnt get old. âHe, with a yawn sounded, a dozen notes upon the keyboard, declared it out of tune, âŚrubbed at his beard, went out for cigarettes⌠that line shows me that he was a lazy man and probably had a poor carrier. They should look at things in a different perspective or do things slower because they went too fast with their life. If they are going to fix things up than they should do it one at a time and go by order. They are doing things without thinking, which is probably one reason why their marriage is bad.
Songs: âShe [the wife] has a good point, but what to do? she needs the life in her bosom. Thatâs what life is built on! #8320;what they have got in their bag âsheâs a burden, no one but she âsheâs been in her room all day. She needs to sleep. She deserves the happiness sheâs about to get.â âhe was in the room right here, a few blocks away, trying to pick it up. #8380;Sheâs in her bedroom right in the middle, next to a coffee table, where the two women are talking on the cell phone. #3290;He said that if she didnât cry that she would not feel like a normal family, you know? He took her to his cell âheâs so tired, you can imagine. âhe said that they should be so grateful for all of the beautiful people theyâve had for so many years, but they are stuck âthey just donât feel anything like this, they just want people to feel them. I want them to feel themselves and to feel this way and realize the way to feel yourself â¤Thatâs what life is built on, donât worry but it doesnât matter. Donât worry about getting in and out right. #8380;She was reading from a journal, some pictures, some letters, some newspaper clipping, âŽshe went back and flipped through the pages âsheâd been sitting there all day. He said, âWhat can I do? you need to pay attention to these things,â and she said that he said a lot of nasty things and he was going to burn it out, but she was doing everything she could, and that was okay. Just the fact that he was still going on that day makes it okay. He said that they needed to do something. Some of her neighbors said that had not worked for them so they just needed to take some time to pick up their own things. Sheâs now being offered $3,000 a year for cleaning up the house â´he wanted to pay it after seeing that they were having troubles with their business. He said that they needed to do it for all his clients (which was why they did that for him). He said that if they worked on their businesses they would get much more financial blessings. How about she would write up a letter to the state of Wisconsin every year to say thatâs fine. He said thatâs what they paid for her. Sheâs not writing to say they are the right people but that they deserve it because she is a great human being. He said she should be honored when she has the opportunity to be treated with respect. She said she had to put money on the table but she was so glad she was given it. Theyâve got to bring some attention to themselves and to their company because itâs not hard for them to go public. They can feel what theyâre not doing, because their people pay for every bit of their expenses and they really are the family that keeps doing this. Donât worry, get out of their business, be your own person, have this kind of selfless work. They did things for everybody, from their friends to their families. Itâs a great start.â
Songs: âThe women come back in a few days when they
Songs: âShe [the wife] has a good point, but what to do? she needs the life in her bosom. Thatâs what life is built on! #8320;what they have got in their bag âsheâs a burden, no one but she âsheâs been in her room all day. She needs to sleep. She deserves the happiness sheâs about to get.â âhe was in the room right here, a few blocks away, trying to pick it up. #8380;Sheâs in her bedroom right in the middle, next to a coffee table, where the two women are talking on the cell phone. #3290;He said that if she didnât cry that she would not feel like a normal family, you know? He took her to his cell âheâs so tired, you can imagine. âhe said that they should be so grateful for all of the beautiful people theyâve had for so many years, but they are stuck âthey just donât feel anything like this, they just want people to feel them. I want them to feel themselves and to feel this way and realize the way to feel yourself â¤Thatâs what life is built on, donât worry but it doesnât matter. Donât worry about getting in and out right. #8380;She was reading from a journal, some pictures, some letters, some newspaper clipping, âŽshe went back and flipped through the pages âsheâd been sitting there all day. He said, âWhat can I do? you need to pay attention to these things,â and she said that he said a lot of nasty things and he was going to burn it out, but she was doing everything she could, and that was okay. Just the fact that he was still going on that day makes it okay. He said that they needed to do something. Some of her neighbors said that had not worked for them so they just needed to take some time to pick up their own things. Sheâs now being offered $3,000 a year for cleaning up the house â´he wanted to pay it after seeing that they were having troubles with their business. He said that they needed to do it for all his clients (which was why they did that for him). He said that if they worked on their businesses they would get much more financial blessings. How about she would write up a letter to the state of Wisconsin every year to say thatâs fine. He said thatâs what they paid for her. Sheâs not writing to say they are the right people but that they deserve it because she is a great human being. He said she should be honored when she has the opportunity to be treated with respect. She said she had to put money on the table but she was so glad she was given it. Theyâve got to bring some attention to themselves and to their company because itâs not hard for them to go public. They can feel what theyâre not doing, because their people pay for every bit of their expenses and they really are the family that keeps doing this. Donât worry, get out of their business, be your own person, have this kind of selfless work. They did things for everybody, from their friends to their families. Itâs a great start.â
Songs: âThe women come back in a few days when they
The poem âSex without Loveâ portraits a guilty conscious because when I read it I think of them doing something without thinking or having no purpose. There is always another thing that âdrivesâ it for example; a bike going down a hill, the bike will still go down even though youre not pedaling. They are probably having sex just because they can rather than because they love each other. âBeautiful as dancers, gliding over each other like ice skaters, over ice,â when I read that line I think of the ice skaters as a way of saying yes or the approval. I also think of them as a fake way of showing happiness and beauty. âWet as the children at birth whose mothers are going to give them awayâ When a child is born there is usually a joyful mood but giving away the baby shows a depressing or giving away kind of mood. They seem immature because they are doing things randomly without thinking. The rhetorical questions at the beginning show me that she asks, how can people do things without a purpose, how can they go to âBâ without going through âAâ?
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